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Which sounds better for advertising?November 1 2007 at 3:12 PM | Derek |
| 1) "Your Satisfaction is Our #1 Priority"
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2) "Your Complete Satisfaction is Guaranteed"
thanx --- Derek.
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Rambo
| Re: Which sounds better for advertising? | November 1 2007, 4:28 PM |
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Phil R
| Re: Which sounds better for advertising? | November 1 2007, 4:48 PM |
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Derek
| Re: Which sounds better for advertising? | November 1 2007, 4:59 PM |
limited space on my biz card 
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Phil R
| Re: Which sounds better for advertising? | November 1 2007, 5:13 PM |
Print smaller 
#2
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Steve
| Re: Which sounds better for advertising? | November 1 2007, 7:11 PM |
"Your Complete Satisfaction is Guaranteed" What happens if they are not satified?? What is your Guarantee?
Try "Your Complete Satisfaction is Guaranteed" or well will re do the job free.
Or maybe something to that effect,,,
But I do like number 1 too I think it says more with a lot less words...
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Jeff
| Re: Which sounds better for advertising? | November 1 2007, 7:45 PM |
#2 you are also opening conversation because some will ask what happens if not happy. Talk is good!
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Rick Lord
| Which sounds better for advertising? | November 1 2007, 8:14 PM |
Ever since that Dry cleaning store got sued (and lost millions) because of their Satisfaction Guarantee no longer offer that type of "open ended" stuff.
I do like number 1 though.
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Ken
| Re: Which sounds better for advertising? | November 2 2007, 8:23 AM |
My #1 priority is my health and safety, not somebody's dirty carpet
but I don't just use 1 chemical like some fellas here.
I do more than encap cleaning.
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Derek
| Re: Which sounds better for advertising? | November 2 2007, 9:45 AM |
thanx for your replies fellas!
Ken,
what does your methodology have to do with #1 or #2? LOL
thanx --- Derek.
BTW,
it's not Encap cleaning.
it's not HWE cleaning.
it's not VLM cleaning.
it's CARPET cleaning.
that's what i sell at least.
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David Hebert
| Re: Which sounds better for advertising? | November 2 2007, 11:58 AM |
My company motto is always on time always reliable.
on our website and info we give to prospects there is a section that spells out what we will do if we fail to meet or promises
David
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Ken
| Re: Which sounds better for advertising? | November 2 2007, 2:25 PM |
My encap juice is really really safe.
Some of my pre-spray for HWE is NOT.
So to the guy who's cleaning, I think the encap method is safer for his health over a 20-25 year period.
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Del Scrivner
| Re: Which sounds better for advertising? | November 2 2007, 6:26 PM |
How about:
"Your Satisfaction is Our #1 Priority- GUARANTEED!" Make you own luck,
Del Scrivner
Owner/Operator
Cowboy's Carpet Care
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Alex
| Re: Which sounds better for advertising? | November 3 2007, 12:12 AM |
Thats it Del, thats the one i would go with of the two.
DK, THERE YOU ARE!
Thanks
Your Servant Alex
A sign of the times!
This message has been edited by theservant on Nov 3, 2007 12:13 AM
This message has been edited by theservant on Nov 3, 2007 12:13 AM
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Derek
| Re: Which sounds better for advertising? | November 3 2007, 12:42 AM |
that would be the way to go. it won't fit on my biz card.
i'm going with #1
thanx fellas --- Derek.
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Del Scrivner
| Re: Which sounds better for advertising? | November 4 2007, 2:28 PM |
Are you using both sides of your biz card Derek?
Make you own luck,
Del Scrivner
Owner/Operator
Cowboy's Carpet Care
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Derek
| Re: Which sounds better for advertising? | November 4 2007, 10:48 PM |
yes i use both sides:
all my cards have a statment of thanx for referrals on the back. but more than half of those get a magnet put on the back of them, so the back is rarely seen anyways.
thanx --- Derek.
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