06-30-2016, 05:09 PM
(This post was last modified: 06-30-2016, 05:12 PM by Lounge Lizards.)
Some CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM, to help you with your site. 
Please get someone to proof read your site for grammar.
Don't mix upper & lower case in your sentences such as :
"The commitment We Provide for our customers"
When talking about particular items, the above may be an exception.
I see several things which I don't like.
For instance, Sandford, in many cases is spelled with a lower case, ie; sandford.
I would NOT refer to other companies by name, knowing how litigious companies in the U.S. can be, ie; stanley steemer.
Check also the spelling, ie; Odour, I believe you are in the U.S. where this is spelled odor??
In your "Services", Odour is listed twice.
One noticeable sentence I picked up on, is this:
"Are you ready for your carpets to be as clean as the day they came out of the factory?"
I don't care, who is cleaning or what they are using, due to wear, etc; this quote can NEVER become real, especially when you get a trashed carpet & they want new for nothing.
You may end up in court because you did not get those carpets looking like the day they came out of the factory.
Pouring baking soda in your vacuum bag can reduce odor, not if people use a Dysoon (deliberate), or Shark, or any of those machines that don't use bags.
I believe that baking soda can also block the fine particle holes in the vac; bags, or even expel it back into the air.
A few instances to check:
I don't like to tell people to treat problems, but to contact me.
As I said at the beginning, this is only CONSTRUCTIVE, I hope you take it as such & have these attended to to make your site all the more better for you.
I wish you all the best with your new website and hope to see more of you on here.
Please get someone to proof read your site for grammar.
Don't mix upper & lower case in your sentences such as :
"The commitment We Provide for our customers"
When talking about particular items, the above may be an exception.
I see several things which I don't like.
For instance, Sandford, in many cases is spelled with a lower case, ie; sandford.
I would NOT refer to other companies by name, knowing how litigious companies in the U.S. can be, ie; stanley steemer.
Check also the spelling, ie; Odour, I believe you are in the U.S. where this is spelled odor??
In your "Services", Odour is listed twice.
One noticeable sentence I picked up on, is this:
"Are you ready for your carpets to be as clean as the day they came out of the factory?"
I don't care, who is cleaning or what they are using, due to wear, etc; this quote can NEVER become real, especially when you get a trashed carpet & they want new for nothing.
You may end up in court because you did not get those carpets looking like the day they came out of the factory.
Pouring baking soda in your vacuum bag can reduce odor, not if people use a Dysoon (deliberate), or Shark, or any of those machines that don't use bags.
I believe that baking soda can also block the fine particle holes in the vac; bags, or even expel it back into the air.
A few instances to check:
- Move area rug two of three times a year to stop constant pressure on one surface. How many rug(?)
- Rubbing or scrubbing carpets after a spell can make the situation worse. Ue the proper cleaning strategies when dealing with different types of spills.
I don't like to tell people to treat problems, but to contact me.
As I said at the beginning, this is only CONSTRUCTIVE, I hope you take it as such & have these attended to to make your site all the more better for you.
I wish you all the best with your new website and hope to see more of you on here.
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Stop moving, start dying........
Take me as I am, or watch me as I go.
I'll retire when I can no longer do what I love, or I no longer love what I can do.
Stop moving, start dying........