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Just started a new business website need opinions
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The main navigation is odd. In particular, the "Privacy" page is one I haven't seen before, certainly not as a main option.

Most websites start out with 4 core pages and branch out from there.
- Home
- Services (with sub-pages for each one, such as residential, commercial, tile&grout, upholstery, pet odor removal, etc.)
- About Us
- Contact Us

Other pages some cleaners will add are:
- Testimonials
- Gallery (showcase some awesome before/after shots of your work)
- Coupons/Promotions
- Blog

This sort of "standard" navigation makes it easy for your customers to find the information they need. They're already accustomed to this navigation on other sites, and you want yours to be as user-friendly as possible.

I second the suggestion to have someone proof your copy. A friend or family member with a keen eye and decent knowledge of proper grammar/punctuation will go a long way to punch things up.
Alexandra Gualtieri
Copywriter/Proofreader
www.basicallybrilliantcopywriting.com
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RE: Just started a new business website need opinions - by Copywriter - 07-01-2016, 01:49 PM



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